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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

<img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/m/h/m…" alt=":iconmh1plz:" title="mh1plz" /><img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/m/h/m…" alt=":iconmh2plz:" title="mh2plz" /><img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/m/h/m…" alt=":iconmh3plz:" title="mh3plz" /><img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/m/h/m…" alt=":iconmh4plz:" title="mh4plz" /><img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/m/h/m…" alt=":iconmh5plz:" title="mh5plz" />

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="17" height="16" alt=":star:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="450" title="Star!"/> I love your work! I'm happy to be critiquing one of your drawings. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>

<img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/m/h/m…" alt=":iconmh1plz:" title="mh1plz" /><img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/m/h/m…" alt=":iconmh2plz:" title="mh2plz" /><img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/m/h/m…" alt=":iconmh3plz:" title="mh3plz" /><img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/m/h/m…" alt=":iconmh4plz:" title="mh4plz" /><img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/m/h/m…" alt=":iconmh5plz:" title="mh5plz" />

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletyellow:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="566" title="Bullet; Yellow"/> Vision:

I gave this part 4 <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="17" height="16" alt=":star:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="450" title="Star!"/> because the overall picture looks magnificent, but I notice that it's slightly too bright in places. Also, judging by her arm, her body is at a profile view, but her breasts say otherwise. Her legs seem at a 3/4 angle, so I think it's the arm that isn't places correctly. It should be more to the right so that we can see part of her neck and part of her shoulder connecting to the neck too.
On the other hand, this lineless piece is amazing, the character looks beautiful! And I love what you did to the background. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>

<img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/m/h/m…" alt=":iconmh1plz:" title="mh1plz" /><img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/m/h/m…" alt=":iconmh2plz:" title="mh2plz" /><img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/m/h/m…" alt=":iconmh3plz:" title="mh3plz" /><img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/m/h/m…" alt=":iconmh4plz:" title="mh4plz" /><img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/m/h/m…" alt=":iconmh5plz:" title="mh5plz" />

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletblue:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="211" title="Bullet; Blue"/> Originality:

I only put 3 s:tar: for originality, because it's a simple pose of a Sonic character.
I did stillgive you three for the awesome background and your unique style of colouring. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletgreen:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="209" title="Bullet; Green"/> Technique:

I have you 4 <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="17" height="16" alt=":star:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="450" title="Star!"/> for the technique. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>
As I said before, the picture is a bit too bright in places, which makes some details less distinguishable. I can see them better in full view, but the smaller version is a bit hard to decipher.
When I say places, I mainly mean the character's skin. It's beautifully shaded, in a soft way, but I think you chose a colour slightly too bright for the lightest parts.
Also, I see you used a different technique for the hair, but it looks a bit wrong in places... for example, the hair to her side (on our left) is shaded very differently from the rest of her hair. I hadn't noticed at first, but now it's a detail I can't miss. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="19" height="19" alt="^^;" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="417" title="Sweating a little..."/> Maybe if you blended the colours together, it would look better. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>

<img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/m/h/m…" alt=":iconmh1plz:" title="mh1plz" /><img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/m/h/m…" alt=":iconmh2plz:" title="mh2plz" /><img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/m/h/m…" alt=":iconmh3plz:" title="mh3plz" /><img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/m/h/m…" alt=":iconmh4plz:" title="mh4plz" /><img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/m/h/m…" alt=":iconmh5plz:" title="mh5plz" />

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletred:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="210" title="Bullet; Red"/> Impact:

4.5 <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="17" height="16" alt=":star:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="450" title="Star!"/> for this! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt=";)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="387" title=";) (Wink)"/>
I love your work, you're one of my favourite artists and your technique really leave me at awe. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>

<img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/m/h/m…" alt=":iconmh1plz:" title="mh1plz" /><img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/m/h/m…" alt=":iconmh2plz:" title="mh2plz" /><img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/m/h/m…" alt=":iconmh3plz:" title="mh3plz" /><img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/m/h/m…" alt=":iconmh4plz:" title="mh4plz" /><img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/m/h/m…" alt=":iconmh5plz:" title="mh5plz" />

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/d/d…" width="16" height="16" alt=":damphyr:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="553" title="damphyr"/> Overall: <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/d/d…" width="16" height="16" alt=":damphyr:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="553" title="damphyr"/>

The overall result is amazing! Despite those little details I pointed out, this picture is beautiful and I can't wait to see more! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>

~Lola<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/r/r…" width="15" height="15" alt=":rose:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="314" title="Rose"/>