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KIMBER Z by GodzillaJAPAN KIMBER Z by GodzillaJAPAN
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:iconmattflamestar:
Okay, very well done the feel of it seems intense like Kimber had just smashed through glass going after her target. The pose could be a bit better, maybe her head tilted down a slight but over all looks perfect for this piece. I feel as there may be a bit to much blood and not enough at the same time. Maybe if it were spaced out and spread thinly over her hair more. Her eyes seem a bit off i cant quite put my finger on it, maybe some veins from the other side? I don't quite know. The shatter is very well done, maybe a few to many small pieces but again very well done. Over all, small nick-picks but very well done. Keep up the great work.
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To start I will state the flaws. as you've already heard from another critique, the eyes are inaccurate. try referring to an actually blood shot eye to understand but the sclera is the area of the eye that displays veins. add veins so it is around the outside of the eye. secondly, if you add thicker blood, similar to the mouth, onto the bangs it would be a little more accurate to the fact that she just mauled someone. now for positives :clap: . I adore the idea and believe it's very impactful, but not enough to give me nightmares. you did amazing on the shatter effect and beautiful on the mouth. I agree the head should be down a little... unless she's on the ground over the body of her victim, roaring at her next victim. The head position could work is what I'm saying. Overall fabulous job, an easy 4 stars from me.
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holy mother of god. THIS IS AWESOME!
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GodzillaJAPAN Dec 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks. :D
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geN8bigfan Dec 13, 2013  Student Artisan Crafter
Scary and epic thing i ever seen c:
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GodzillaJAPAN Dec 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks. :D
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farmy4321 Oct 19, 2013  Student Filmographer
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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GodzillaJAPAN Oct 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks. :D
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Dark6Caskerd Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
I can't stop going back to this piece to admire it
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GodzillaJAPAN Oct 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks. :D
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Dark6Caskerd Oct 21, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
your very welcome
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AshiroKei Oct 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
amazing, very cute!

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